Marangal Platypus enters the Quietly Astonished Crowd

Hello guys! I am STILL writing The Forgiver's Promise, waiting for comments/votes on Chapter 1 & 2! So I would like to ask, if you would go there and read some of it??? And if 5 separate people comment/vote, then we can post chapter three and so on and so forth! :-D

My Song!

I wrote a song yesterday called "The Colors of Light"! Go ahead read it! :3

VERSE 1:

You know just why

This has happened to me

Cuz you are there

Even when I can’t see

VERSE 2:

I see the trials

And they are all I see

Though a portait

Is being made through this

CHORUS

As the colors of dark

Is exposed to the light

The brush is set

And the painting is sure

The light is drawn across

The Canvas wall and the

Dark is frightened

By all the Colors of light

(The colors of light--)

VERSE 3:

As an artist;

Knows what he is to paint

You know my heart

And you know my name

VERSE 4:

The Author now;

He writes my story’s song

He paints his love

On his hands and feet

CHORUS

VERSE 5:

A man shan’t know

The end of his story

Til the last note

Til the last two words

VERSE 6:

The End will be

A start anew; He will

Create for Him

New Jerusalem

Well, let me know what you think in the comments in both the book and the song!

~Mari Fahel~