[EXT. by the stream]
[V.O]
--That’s When I found out that this “white men” were not of this time
period either. Some were dressed in pirate like clothes made of
modern-day leather and others wore a red t-shirt with capris. I wave the
makeshift white flag as I stood on my side of the river.[The other side of the river has plenty of men in not-of-this-time clothing, pointing guns at the children, as they cowered and cried]
[V.O.] I stared at a man in particular, his beard reached down to his belt in a wiry curl. He wore an eye patch and his black leather coat went down to his ankles.
Man 1: So, why is a white boy in with those Indians, might I ask?
Alan: Let the children go.
Man 1: Who are you to tell me what to do, boy?
Alan: I-- am like you.
Well, I'm working on this screenplay so hard that I think I'm gonna finish! I hope you guys will enjoy it as I post it on Wattypad! <3
Preferring to look insane,
Mari Fahel
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